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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-06 02:37 PM



Sounds part the night
Rampaging
Alive
Words tossed into vacuums
That remain
Drifting
Amongst
A quieted network
Casting patterns
Of dreams
To desire
Of pleasure


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-06 02:38 PM


A quieted network
Casting patterns
Of dreams
To desire
Of pleasure

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Margherita
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2 posted 2005-01-06 02:42 PM



I hear this one very well, dear Dave.

Love this sound!

Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-01-06 02:50 PM


"A quieted network
Casting patterns
Of dreams
To desire
Of pleasure"


Very gently and softly spoken Dave.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-06 02:59 PM


I really like this - and its echo-

Susan

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