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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-06 07:41 AM


The Weightless Chair

To sit upon a blade of thought
And have no feeling of its wrought
It is to sit upon a throne
Without the feel of flesh and bone

It is the essence of the way
A victory upon the day
A stroll upon a rainbows road
An inroad to the souls abode

And though I’ve seen it tip the scale
It’s a variable avail
Osmotic in its passing through
But truly one I’d call a coup

You cannot feel the sharp of blade
A fantasy within a glade
It is the light of spirits vie
And passes threw the needles eye

It is a flight around a bend
Available for you to spend



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2005-01-06 07:49 AM


It is a flight around a bend
Available for you to spend


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kinda like having your very own dragon to take you on a flight to Shangri-La.
Randy has his double saddle on. *L*


*ww*

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2 posted 2005-01-06 07:53 AM


It is the essence of the way
A victory upon the day
A stroll upon a rainbows road
An inroad to the souls abode
What a way to start my day Sey, this is perfection of thought in words as only you can do it.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-01-06 07:58 AM


You cannot feel the sharp of blade
A fantasy within a glade
It is the light of spirits vie
And passes threw the needles eye

It is a flight around a bend
Available for you to spend


Yes, yes, yes, instead of feeling the sharp of blade, you feel a spirit newly made....

Amazing you are....

Morning Sy...
Thank you for this bath of light

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-01-06 09:05 AM



Hmmm...two decidedly pointed posts
in two days...

I think we ought to give you a word a week, Sy

just to see how you can bend it seven different ways toward smiles...



Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-01-06 09:10 AM


Mr. T., you truly are a wonder! What a creative and brilliant mind you have! It is beyond me how you manage to post a sonnet a day and with the most imaginative themes!

Have a glorious morning!

EA

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6 posted 2005-01-06 10:50 AM


You cannot feel the sharp of blade
A fantasy within a glade
It is the light of spirits vie
And passes threw the needles eye


Awesome write once again Seymour.
Thankyou for sharing.
hugs, Chris

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7 posted 2005-01-06 10:54 AM


Wonderful piece to read this morn Sy!
Have a great day whist I shovel snow.
~Morning hugs and hot tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

scorpio
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8 posted 2005-01-06 02:22 PM


A blade of thought..Sy too much snow here to even see a blade of grass.  But I did enjoy this poem.

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2005-01-06 02:42 PM


You cannot feel the sharp of blade
A fantasy within a glade
It is the light of spirits vie
And passes threw the needles eye

Now I loved that Sy!  Off to play in the snow now, hugs at you both down there in the heat!

Ericc
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10 posted 2005-01-06 04:10 PM


Excellent write!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-01-06 08:06 PM


JM,
If Randy has his double saddle on then perhaps we should take a flight Winkiewinkie


Gentle
Love your replies.

LeeJ
Glad you enjoyed the bath. LOL

Sunshine
Love ya.

Earth Angel
You just made this day a glorious one.

Chris,
Thank you for the read and hug.

Nancy,
Had my days of snow glad to be in the warm.

scorpio,
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Sharon,
Had my share of snow, enjoying the sun.

Ericc
Thank you my friend.


passing shadows
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12 posted 2005-01-07 07:44 AM


wow!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-01-07 07:47 AM


passing,
Good morning WOW.

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