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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-05-2005 09:18 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The air is cold
and the field outside
a blank white

around which leafless branches
create a context
for what isnít there

so that if one wanders
with his eyes
he might well ponder
what he doesnít see

if he thinks at alló
a silent absence in his being
finding kinship with the view
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-05-2005 09:23 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Air totally cold
Four degrees grasping one's lungs
Words written with breath

But a smile will crack our lips
Seasons are temporary

redheart angrybraids
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2 posted 01-06-2005 05:31 AM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

i love this poem, it reminds me of wisconsin in the winter,
it's beautiful and distilled.

remember the black sky nights
kindly,
redheart
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well done!
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4 posted 01-06-2005 08:03 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Great write! ^_^

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Drauntz
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good self talking.
 
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