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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-01-05 07:42 PM



My eyes are shy
when you look
deep into    my soul
that way.

You see past
the woman child
into the sensual
side of me.

Your voice soothes
my spirit with
soft words.

Your touch
  reminds me
   that I am
      more than
       just a woman...

          I am
             yours...




The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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with you
1 posted 2005-01-05 07:47 PM


*huge sigh*
this is soooo perfectly romantic!


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Gaia
2 posted 2005-01-05 07:48 PM


oohhhh, someone should be very pleased with this, its a beauty! just like the author

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-01-05 08:00 PM


Oh my Donna....this is exquisite!!
Love this!
Hugs pretty lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-01-05 08:59 PM


This...

               private moment....

priceless!

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
5 posted 2005-01-05 09:55 PM


its lovely to be seen isn't it?
i can relate; it happens rarely for me.

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-01-06 05:19 AM


I am liking your writings lately...I have always liked whatever you have written, but lately, there is a glow

love the new pic too

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-01-06 02:02 PM


your replies make me smile...
thank you one and all.
STAY WARM if you are where it is cold...
brrr.....  

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