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Pseudo-Summer
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Pseudo-Summer |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Pseudo-Summer Looks like summer save the “bare-skin” trees sky’s all blue, totally, yet cream colored branches tangled with utility wires provide a rich contrast of dark and light to the azure private homes give a quilt-like appearance and though we see them as separates, they, we, are all connected within the wires’ stretches separate yet tapped in to the same power the same resource a camaraderie of which we seldom ponder it’s a faith we hold in common a faith that the power will be there at the flip of a switch or the lifting of a receiver we ask we receive as long as we remit from sleeve’s labors amazing the power to communicate, regardless of distance; the power to be warm within the truth of the season, despite the sunlight, this day has not reached 30º F, yet those abiding are warm ©January 5, 2005 Northern Hemisphere [This message has been edited by VAS (01-05-2005 06:28 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting thoughts expertly written. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Judging by the fact that it is about -15 F outside right now I am not complaining! ~Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i really enjoyed the quilt like vision .... very niiiiice. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It seems upside down Slow to start vague and by the time you have the words only friends are left. Writing and style fine but upside down. dave |
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