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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-01-05 09:39 AM



Hanging
down
dangling
umbrella shower
of
flower power

that's what you are

dancing
through the day
at the end
of a
tenuously
slender
thread

       moving
to and fro
    as only a flower can know
  how to dance
the delicate balance
       of
  s
   u
  r
v
  i
    v
   a
  l

When
at the end
of the day
I look at you,
hanging
in there
against
the elements
that would
tear you apart,
I smile,
seeing
we
have much
in
c
  o
   m
  m
o
n



  

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2005-01-05 09:42 AM


Wow, dear Kacy, how you do these so perfectly! The shape of a flower! And the content ... of high quality as always.

Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2005-01-05 09:47 AM


I agree with Margherita .... WOW !!
hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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3 posted 2005-01-05 09:53 AM


thanks, to two of my favorite Passions flowers
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4 posted 2005-01-05 11:59 AM


Oh My!!  I love this!!!
here's to flower power!! *clink*
A keeper for my library so I can learn how to make shapes.
hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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5 posted 2005-01-05 12:59 PM


I liked this VERY much!
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6 posted 2005-01-05 06:44 PM


Kacy...I love this! Awesome write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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7 posted 2005-01-05 06:55 PM


Very nice.

JL

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8 posted 2005-01-05 07:49 PM


thanks friends! I enjoyed presenting you with this flower  
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9 posted 2005-01-05 09:47 PM


feeling groovy....

glad there are some flowergirls still around
to join me

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10 posted 2005-01-06 10:53 PM


glad you're still bloomin  
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