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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-01-04 09:54 PM



Your eyes how they twinkle in everyway you smile
your gentel touch,the way you stroke my hair makes
me miss you oh so much..

To just see your smile,the only thing that
is real for me is you,my heart is boucning
my brain is racing my body is aching

this thing called love is really wearing me
down but I say bring it on and sing this song
wake me up inside my soul as long as you and I
will grow old together on this planet eart

It's you who I want to explore the birds and bee's
with,won't you let me tease it,take your hand with
mine go into the garden where the fairy's fly so
sweetly with the butterflies. Just colaspe on the
grass and kiss for hrs
Dedicated to my muse,Mike

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2005-01-04 09:58 PM


well I'm guessing that Mike the Muse is one inspirational kinda guy! this is lovely
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-01-05 12:03 PM


thank's he is very special to me

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-01-05 07:50 AM


I liked this

good write

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4 posted 2005-01-05 07:01 PM


Very nice write Julie!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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