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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-01-04 08:36 AM


Attentive to your slow, rythmic
rising and falling breath,
i enter between them,
into the space pause.

Speaking, i hear them as
i talk to you and love
the very murmur of air,
feel it whisper in my ear.

Your very thoughts arrive
in my mind, speak in a
discourse only our brains
may decipher, breath to me.

© Copyright 2005 P.D - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-01-04 10:19 AM


Goldenrose
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-01-04 10:31 AM


Beautiful...simply beautiful!
hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2005-01-04 11:18 AM


Absolutely beautiful! This happens when true oneness is perceived and experienced.
Love, Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-01-04 01:33 PM


I will breathe my love into your ear... For only your love is my breath!
Listening to you recite it to me over the phone last night it was beautiful...even more beautiful today!
Love xxxxxxxxx Your Vermillionqueen


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-04-2005 02:10 PM).]

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
5 posted 2005-01-04 06:22 PM


Lovely write Goldenrose...just beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-01-05 07:57 AM


lovely write
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