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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-01-04 06:30 AM



Beating heart laying,
beating still,
in want, in need,

your words to fill,
your seed planted,
I feed,

Half a heart cannot,
beat alone,
It yearns, it mourns,
for the other part,

To where it roams,
across the ocean,
finding its home,

Two halves,
make a whole,
together, combined,
one soul,

Oh, my bleeding heart,
whose tears are,
filled with sorrow,

Missing you, kissing you,
wanting you,
minute upon minute,
hour upon hour,

Acheing in my bones,
stealing,
the marrow,

needing, bleeding heart,
come my love,
kiss the sky for me,
paint my horizons,

You would die for me,
spilling out all of,
your passions,

Oh my needing,
bleeding heart,
aches for the
other part,

Come to me,
let our love,
sew and mend,
move and blend,

Together, forever,
into one,
forever free..........


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-05-2005 06:08 AM).]

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-01-04 08:31 AM


Beautifully worded..passion richly portrayed...i like it very much thank you..

Goldenrose.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2005-01-04 11:27 AM


paint my horizons

Passionate, beautiful song of your longing heart.

Love, Margherita


*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2005-01-04 06:59 PM


Very romantic write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
4 posted 2005-01-04 07:10 PM


Stirring, Beautiful and Romantic are your expressions of Love and of Needing the One who makes you (your heart) so very very complete. Enjoyable reading. -Bob
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-01-05 07:59 AM


how gorgeous!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-01-09 08:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
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