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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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I sit back thinking of the days, When nothing could stand in our ways. When we could talk for hours on end, Time with each other we would spend. I remember... Hardly now do we speak, And I start to grow too weak. Not good enough for you fills my mind, When in my heart I know forever we'll bind. And I remember... I know I can't go on without you, Hoplessly in love with you but what can I do. Fading away slowly you were always there for me, I wish I could open your eyes to see. That I remember... You mean more than the world to me, You've brought to me loads of glee. There is no me without you, I hope you still feel it like I do. Because I still remember... does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
things change like that...yeah... I know |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Know what the best thing that happened to me - the person I loved more than anything couldn't be there for me - and I had to learn how to enjoy me for me - and now I can enjoy him whether he's there or not |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maybe she still feels the same Kyle.. Perhaps you should ask her or send her this poem. Excellent thoughts in this write. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
she feels the same still...were just going through really trying times once again over some lame stuff caused by her mother does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Hoplessly in love with you but what can I do. Fading away slowly you were always there for me, I wish I could open your eyes to see. That I remember..." this here...is perfect  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was really good. thanks for sharing |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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