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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-05 01:38 PM


My Day

I walk new paths of awe each day
A wonderland of senses play
From green to lean, from right to wrong
From weak to strong each has a song

From grime to prime it moves in time
Each day it seems a mime of rhyme
From rainbows into whimsy doom
From doom into a flowers bloom

I drink my dreams out buttercups
Within the wine of downs and ups
And dance within the mist of wile
Until I set my mind an Isle

And there I clothe myself in peace
A day by day a living lease
That lights the dark and shades the sun
Each day a life till it is done

And in the turning of the core
I find the truth of evermore


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River
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1 posted 2005-02-05 02:41 PM


the curiosity of how you could have pulled this off with that constant rhyme is driving me crazy! lol. cool beans, I like this.

               - River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

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2 posted 2005-02-05 03:31 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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iliana
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3 posted 2005-02-06 05:33 AM


And, Sy, I'm ending my day on this note.  Perhaps, I'll walk down some of those paths in my dreams.  Always a joy to read your words.   .....jo
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-02-06 07:50 AM


River
A pleasure to have you read and comment.
Thank you.

Alli,
Thank you for the reply.

iliana
Always a joy to see your name here.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2005-02-06 12:33 PM


And there I clothe myself in peace
A day by day a living lease
That lights the dark and shades the sun
Each day a life till it is done

And in the turning of the core
I find the truth of evermore

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and each day we find truth in your rhymes divine.

*ww*


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-02-06 01:43 PM


JM,
You sooth the dragon of my well.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-02-06 03:14 PM



I set my sights, each goal a light
And how I rhyme, is proven right
Because of Sy, I see the more
And strive to beat the wave to shore...

I shine a bit, each day, you see
When words are framed in poetry.






serenity blaze
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8 posted 2005-02-06 03:20 PM


"I drink my dreams out buttercups"

smile

I like buttah too.

And I think we should proclaim a celebratory week for our seymour, in which everyday would be called "syday" and the fairies will laugh and sing as butterflies dance synchronicity, and the bees will all agree to put their stingers away during this glorious week of joy.



You are loved seymour.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-02-06 03:45 PM


serenity,
Just touch me with your pen and I am happy.


passing shadows
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10 posted 2005-02-06 11:19 PM


day by day
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-02-06 11:39 PM


passing,
Day by day.

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