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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Shallow ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~shallow the depth of love tear-stained droplets shed heartbreak in never-ending quake peels falsified facade from swollen eyes ridding the world of one more soul nearing the breaking point treading saline shallow~ *This one is for a special friend, for in the grief she is floundering* ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
sad this - very emotive -  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such sad heartfelt words dear Marge.. Sending comforting hugs to your friend...and you! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You have a heart of gold Marge, people are lucky to may call you friend. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I couldn't have said it better than Titia! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I"m sure your friend takes comfort in your words...I know I do |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
May your friend fine peace soon. Corinne |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A very touching poem and I'm sure your friend will appreciate it and you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Any tear is a tear....but sometimes there are tears that burn more than the eyes. These (I mean, these) are that kind. Bless you for this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful and touching for your friend Marge! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
heartbreak in never-ending quake Stunning line in a deeply touching piece. I enjoy the sharing of your heart, dear Marge. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, this was brilliantly written....so sad, and so descriptive of the reality; but not, I think, shallow.  ....jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very heartfelt piece Marge. Hugs dear lady. Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
comforting words indeed i have missed your beautiful thoughts glad i cought this one |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
margie, you are a dearheart....one of kindness with words of compassion and true grit...thank you for sharing this, wishing your friend heals with your wise support. Hugs |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all, dear people for letting me know that you like this piece of my heart~  RatFriend~ quote:That's simply beautiful ... thank you dear friend of mine~ *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*` ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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