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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
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0 posted 2005-01-03 10:59 AM

Your love has been long time,
It is hard to know,
How long ?
Since It has been,
Love has gone away,
Till I got to know,
How long can be crazy,
And lose it easily,
Never realise it will be hard
Enough to lose,
Your careness and loveiness
Used to be dear to me,
But you had to say
You don't love me anymore,
No,
You don't love me,
So why and how time flies?
I miss your love,
Yes,
Darling,
Give me a chance,
I will try my best,
And please you on everything,
you need
Your love has been long time,
It is hard to know,
How long since It has been?
Your love has been long time,

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-03 11:03 AM

Love has gone away,
Till I got to know,
How long can be crazy,

~*~

Sometimes, crazy can come
in a matter of moments,
and sometimes, we don't know
until after it's gone
just how crazy it all was...

Well done, Vandana...
you gave a lot of food for thought...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2005-01-03 12:47 PM

The missing of what used to be is the hardest part.

Enjoyed your poem very much vandana~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-03 02:46 PM

Hard, this, to love so - and your depth of feeling is most apparent in your plea

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-03 06:51 PM

"I miss your love,
Yes,
Darling,
Give me a chance,"

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-04 05:11 AM

this aches my heart

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-01-04 06:45 AM

Feeling your ache...

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-01-04 11:36 AM

So why and how time flies?

This alone speaks volumes. It's sad, dear Vandana, but well done.

Your heart hurts, but it is open always to let love flow freely.

Love, Margherita

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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8 posted 2005-01-19 10:56 PM

It's always long time, you know...there's no such thing as short love...short something maybe, but that ain't love....and you capture that so well here.

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