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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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just a line there not hardly noticable unless your eyes are closed and you are nude stepping blind following my voice just suggestions commanding, demanding does the ache bother you when you step that wide and feel the vulnarable over the spotlight the heat of it melting your seam making you water that only I can drink and you beg me to swim to dive in and save you but I hold your head down under my high tide ocean til your smile drowns me _____________ Dark |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The trusting act is one most valuable to full-fledged lovers... well done, DS |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
weighing all of the traditions and taboos... then just stepping in over the head and listening to the warm thanks ms deca |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
 "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like Snow's response - 'course me - it's more  - Mucho enjoy reading your ocean, Dark-  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms snow..your thud just does me!! thank you for the image ______________________ ms suzz..I prefer you wet too (flinging icy sea water onto your shear T shirt..whoops)(grin) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that only I can drink and you beg me to swim to dive in and save you but I hold your head down under my high tide ocean til your smile drowns me coming in , just to get a quick rush and gush from the master |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I am wondering how you got away with posting this here...  it is amazing, as usual my friend...but then I have always been an ocean oriented person.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
o wow |
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