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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Underneath a slivered moon sat a city bathed in light, Within the light within the city lived a nighttime shadow, Could it be that Luna’s cast created nightime’s shadow? I laughed out loud at such a thought in city’s neoned light. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
interesting write neon lights, shadows, slivered moons yep, all the elements needed to create a moment of Luna-see lunacy brought together LOL but of course, I also read a deeper meaning in this, a sadder note |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I enjoyed reading this, Tim, and liked your word play. Yes, a deeper meaning... miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Liked the word play! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Me too, me too! Especially as I am slightly touched by the moon  Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Enjoyed the vivid contrasts, and the slant of which you wrote. Nice lighting, Tim~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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