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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-01-02 01:56 PM



As if our movements belonged in
stillness.

And the world revolved around
our fingertips.

There is only this caress.

And the quiet moments of
our receiving.

© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-02 01:59 PM



Filigreed lace...

Susan
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2 posted 2005-01-02 02:02 PM


delicate in it's loveliness

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-01-02 02:05 PM


Shhhh.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-01-02 02:19 PM


Yesss....like velvet.
DavePage
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5 posted 2005-01-02 02:21 PM


Eric

I loved to see you shrink this even further.

Maybe a game once played of a single character on a line.

Crystal words from you.

Dave

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6 posted 2005-01-02 02:59 PM


"And the quiet moments of
our receiving."

And how beautiful those moments are.  As always, a brief and so very meaningful write.


Margherita
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7 posted 2005-01-02 04:39 PM


Sweet surrendering to the stillness of a moment that holds everything.

So beautiful, dear Eric!
I love you.
Margherita

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8 posted 2005-01-02 07:18 PM


Beautiful write Eric!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2005-01-03 12:52 PM


Thank you for sharing the moment, Ericc!
Loved your words and the feel of this~

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2005-01-04 06:54 AM


Soft as a rose petal~
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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11 posted 2005-01-04 12:11 PM


simply lovely...

~tier

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with you
12 posted 2005-01-04 08:00 PM


ahha.... you make me *SIGH* every time
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13 posted 2005-01-04 09:30 PM


oh yes
GG
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14 posted 2005-01-05 05:05 AM


So peaceful...
yes.

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.

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15 posted 2005-01-06 09:00 AM


Eric, this is pure harmony...excellent prose
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16 posted 2005-01-06 09:42 AM



a caress softly captured in space and time...
sensuously lovely...

K

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17 posted 2005-01-08 04:25 AM


A very beautiful and romantic write,
dear Eric. It's so pretty.
Hugs,
Ethel

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