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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Morning glorys line the path A welcoming committee of color From palest lavender To brilliant cobalt blue They all say You I feel you here You've walked these very steps My cells celebrate you nearness Denying the claim of crystal skies That you are far away I sit and absorb The sound of surf on shore And hope you hear the whisper Of your name. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wow... You know, anyone who would want to feel that whisper, can, now. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearFriend~ Your thoughts shine through like crystal moonbeams on a garden path~ Sending you GREAT BIG HUGS~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this goes on my list of all time favorites! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sweet lady...much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
From your heart to mine in a single read - now that is poetry done in love m'friend.
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My cells celebrate you nearness Denying the claim of crystal skies That you are far away Oh so sweetly sigh worthy, and a very pretty poem, suthern gal~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I sit and absorb The sound of surf on shore And hope you hear the whisper Of your name." Whew! I loved this!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Love's an elusive thing when we look for it....but sometimes it's just there and damned if we know why. Damned if I know why, but it's there, among the morning glories, carved in the air like initials of the lovers who passed there, or may some day. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Then I hope they do... and do. *S* Thank you! *S* Marge: You are so dear... I thank you very much! *S* Ericc: I'm truly honored... thank you so very much! *S* Enchantress: I'm so glad... thank you! *S* Mysteria: Thank you so, kind lady. *S* Blues: I love that... sigh worthy. *S* Thank you! *S* Alli: I'm very glad... thank you so much! *S* Ratleader: I think the true poetry here is in your response... it's beautiful... and I thank you! *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel you here You've walked these very steps My cells celebrate you nearness Denying the claim of crystal skies That you are far away ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ever the tardy moth...yaya  you know Im loving the allits and the assonance in this gem...was mouth candy to read aloud also the imagery and colors... a lovely poetic sigh Ruth-girlie  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...this is exquisite Suthern... just so beautiful!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: Your highlighting made me notice my typo... so I'm thumping the guilty fingers right now for their transgressions. *G* Thank you very much... I'm so glad you liked! *S* GS: Thank you so much, sweet lady... your kindness is greatly appreciated! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How absolutely lovely, we are indeed so lucky to have read this lovely gem...thank you and Happy New Year.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“I sit and absorb The sound of surf on shore And hope you hear the whisper Of your name.” So much love in a whisper. Great write!! JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Belle, you write with such depth of feeling ~ and "Presence".  Sending you lots of love and wishes for 2005 to be very good to you! Big hugs with lots of love, Linda xo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Just beautiful. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this is just like the catch of breath of something so beautiful you don't want to breathe lest it leave..... so perfect I wanted to hurry to the end, but once I got to the end, I didn't want it to end anymore.....I wanted to hold on to the feeling |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I sit and absorb The sound of surf on shore And hope you hear the whisper Of your name. Lovely, suthern. 'specially liked this... misc'e |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is such a lovely poignancy in your phrasing. There is such beautiful promise here. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Just because I like it -- and you! Your voice gets stronger and stronger, and your eyes deeper but softer. This is true beauty. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have been terribly remiss in expressing my gratitude... please forgive me! *S* Your incredibly generous responses are greatly appreciated! *S* Thank you!!! |
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