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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-01-02 10:59 AM

There’s Naught in This World I’d Rather Do

I love you sweetheart and here ‘tis professed,
That my being doth know naught but unrest,
This yearning that creeps from depths of soul,
Seek’st thy soft kiss in the breath you stole.

Hunger, yea’s been long wedded to mine arms,
For I dear this night would taste of your charms,
To a bed of frippery I’d swift thee,
Trimmed in crepe de chine if thou would’st agree.

Wisteria beloved I’d plait in thy hair,
Perfumes from France sweet I’d bring’st thee to wear,
My eyes would caress thee with naught but love,
For thou art the one I think the world of.

‘Twas never wrong to love one so complete,
To ply dalliance in odes writ indiscreet,
These are but the words I’d whisper this night,
May our souls of want they forthwith ignite,

There’s naught in this world I’d rather do,
Then slowly, tenderly, make love to you.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-01-02 11:07 AM

The feeling of these words as read wrap the reader in all that is sought from one heart to another.
Excellent write.
May your dreams come true.
TD

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-01-02 11:15 AM

EvocativeVerse2
What more can be said? Enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-01-02 11:26 AM

Kevin...this is one huge SIGH of a write..

(note to self: remember to breathe while reading Kevin's work)

Beautiful beautiful!!!
Happy New Year Hugs!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2005-01-02 12:47 PM

"Twas never wrong to love one so complete"

of the entire beautiful piece the above line is what stole my breath ....i'll be reading this one over and over.... hugs... s

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2005-01-02 01:35 PM

Kevin,
My dearest you love melting a heart but then you wouldn't be you if you didn't.
Love this one.

Hugs

Amour Vous always

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-01-09 12:02 PM

Passion flows like a river to the soul of the reader...

So tender and sweet~

Enjoyed~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-01-09 12:51 PM

I think you must be one of my favorite romantics - you write love so beautifully-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-09 01:35 AM

This is beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-01-09 05:35 AM

whoa!

wow

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