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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-02-2005 02:51 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Look a moment
over there.
Winter is on the fallow field.

Gray sky.
A line of elms.
Snow upon the hills.

See, though still,
how beautiful
the weathered barn beside the road,

the silver surfaced
frozen pond,

apart from what is said.
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-02-2005 05:17 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I see it

and it's beautiful
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2 posted 01-02-2005 04:30 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I like this...lovely write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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3 posted 01-02-2005 06:26 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I live it~~

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4 posted 01-02-2005 06:33 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Yes... lovely.   Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
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5 posted 01-19-2005 10:33 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

"...between the woods and frozen lake...."

Yes...just so, just so. You have a true gift for building scintillating imagery into tiny bursts of words.....

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6 posted 01-20-2005 07:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Gifted indeed!

Another gem, John!
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nodding agreement

extraordinary in the simplicity

just like the subject

a study of quiet contrasts and I do enjoy the stillness of your thoughts shared.

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Enjooyed...James
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I see the poetry of wordless images, some breathtaking others fallow, enjoyed

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ha, an early one. now you rarely use look-see-said.

beauiful.
 
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