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Dare You Allow
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Today, a song came to shore With marrow and flute Tasting warm like the sun Handing me a sweater Twinkling us like awakening stars Living this day, again…only this time Turning up the volume Of clairvoyant searching We need’nt know, intent to reason Cuz I watched you, while you were sleeping You smiled, you know, no pain tonight And that high mountain wall Sheds a winter blossom Perhaps this time...perhaps this time We’ll stumble in the right direction You and me… Unlike our other lovers Whose breath faded from our hearts I’d like to remember our greatest accomplishments The one blade of grass which smiled green A truly remarkable feeling Someday my friend We’ll both find someone to love Come, we’ll fit within the shadow's glare But change the years spent searching Trying, and the blue lights shall flicker faintly To the senses of our heartbeats I am not her, nor can I be But….I will love you through your thoughts eternally...eternally Or is it the want of something you cannot have? Please know the scent of 'my' perfume And become but a thread of the darkness Your famine my love, is over Dare you trust? Dare you speak? Dare you allow this moment... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
LeeJ - this speaks of soft heart longing and desires - beautifully worded - may your challenge be met and answered agreeably- Happy New Year - and may love linger in your heart and home -  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Dare you trust? Dare you speak? Dare you allow this moment..." I find myself wondering what the world would be like if all of us could dare these things instead of always being so guarded. Another lovely write from your pen. Happy New year - may all your dreams come true. Yes, well, we know about "them there" dreams, don't we? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles & hugs to you Honeybunch, yes, indeed we do.... Susan, Happy New year to you as well, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, I know not how others feel when they read you, but you rattle my bones and play havoc with my breathing.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhehhee, hey Sy, hello, good to see you in there...hey, give Randy a big hug and good will glass for me....wish you were here, so we could all toast in the New Year together, wouldn't that be something, A Passions Get together....many many happy returns sent your way sir....hope you had a smilin holiday.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well... Sy said it best |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sounds like Aphrodite has found her Paris, but cannot touch him, except in a dream.. Dreams are just that way, like Gods and Goddesses, they can be perfect... "Dare you trust? Dare you speak? Dare you allow this moment..." No, do not dare in the physical; the fantasy will be soiled if it becomes a reality...(MHO) Indeed, an enjoyable read... ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dare we ever dare does the sun allow us the morning to consider? enjoyed this and you glad you are back lee j |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Unlike our other lovers Whose breath faded from our hearts I’d like to remember our greatest accomplishments The one blade of grass which smiled green A truly remarkable feeling Someday my friend DARE you? but of course there is no other moment |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Today, a song came to shore With marrow and flute Tasting warm like the sun Handing me a sweater" Beautiful poetry Lee J. JL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I dare? ....stepping forward... |
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