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suthern
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0 posted 2004-12-30 03:28 PM


When a heart finds love
It cannot list
Definitive reasons
For this one and not that
It simply says "mine."
When my heart found you
Logic said no.
But throughout all seasons
We belong together
Forever entwined.

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1 posted 2004-12-30 03:33 PM


Sounds definitive to me:“Mine”
Beautiful sentiment in this write.
Enjoyed.

JL


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2 posted 2004-12-30 03:34 PM


"It simply says "mine."


love that line...

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3 posted 2004-12-30 03:49 PM


Thank you both. *S*

The irony of this is now choking me... but I do appreciate your kindness! *S*

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4 posted 2004-12-30 05:07 PM


OhSweetSuthernGal~
How this one chokes me up ... oh my ... you've written a slice of my heart too~

Thinking of you ... tenderly~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-12-30 05:21 PM


Oh, goodness, Suthern. I felt this one!
I have to just look away from logic and
listen to my heart.
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-12-30 05:47 PM


At times you regret that it is true.

Really good words.

Dave

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7 posted 2004-12-31 07:56 AM


Thank you all so very much. *S* I wrote this as part of a contest... my muse was appalled that she was supposed to come up with something in 2 minutes... I could barely type for her shuddering. *S* Thanks for liking the result! *S*
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8 posted 2005-01-19 11:13 PM


Like indeed -- I love! This is really good.

...psst...go write fast some more....!!!

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9 posted 2005-01-24 01:02 PM


Ratleader: From your lips to my muse's ear... please! LOL

Thank you... so much. *S*

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10 posted 2005-02-10 12:23 PM


IWIHWT!  Truly a pleasure to read, suthern!  and with that, she grabs it, running quickly to shelve it in the library...
                misc'e

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11 posted 2005-02-10 01:05 PM


Belle, what you have found, may it never become lost!

Only someone who wears "Spock" ears is able to put logic before heart! ~ and you have very lovely ears!

Affectionate hugs,
EA

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12 posted 2005-02-11 11:43 AM


micellanea & Earth Angel: Why am I not surprised that two of my favorite people gift me with such smiles? miscellanea's sprint and EA's Spock ears... just what I needed. *S* Thank you both very much! *S*
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