Los Angeles California
(one of the best. you wrote so wonderfully.
be careful the eyes...tree has many eyes, some may belong to human or ? )
watching you think,...
giving those cells of yours
value..... (I love the expression of gift.)
In harsh light,
pondering a poem,
those of your face,
suffused with years of thinking,
soften the glare.
( harsh/soften... the inter-reaction of light of Bulb and light of thinking)
naked as crabs
outside our shells,...
I like that it takes
such simple keys....
(I like that you mentioned this in a very casual way...in fact it is the simple cells's work to sense a blue sky and to imagine a rose blooming year arround...in CA it is. In Il it is not. and how perfectly use the word of KEY then OPEN..so poetically express the view of a poet.
to open a world where the sky is blue
bloom all year.
(wonderful, sooooo beautiful)