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some bill's jill |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I wrote to you in the other room love words in lead with a screwed on cap just for your mouth eyes to try to pry open and nurse the verse but you won't taste them due to the chocolate in the moat between there and here and a lady always did love candy and diamonds more than the truth about her hair or if she was better in bed, when she was bad ______________ dark (gloveless 2) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always a pleasure to read you amigo... don't think I've ever been dissapointed with the offerings... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
just for your mouth eyes to try to pry open and nurse the verse ~*~ Never a disappointment...always a pleasure. Lady Élan |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
your words spill with talent - Hugs - S Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . when we choose actions that bring happiness and success to others, the fruit of o |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I'd call this a classic. Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
between there and here and a lady always did love candy and diamonds more than the truth about her hair or if she was better in bed, when she was bad ______________ NOPE.......save the candy and diamonds, just give me a stud that can keep up with me |
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