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Starlight Composition
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Starlight Composition |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Night falls the squalls of silver air On parquet walks in silent stare Committed to the moon she bows To empty out all time allows About me in the frosted blows Bemoans the echo heaven knows A page torn out and sent in sigh Delivered shivered pressed and dry But not too further could be caught Cinched up in hope of heartstrings taut My fingers wrapped of kite tail string So cold the bold of winter’s sting Hand over hand this dream drawn back Held sacred here through luster’s lack To warm again with ease to spare Night falls the squalls of silver air Copyright Kkh 12/28/04 |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
beautiful rhyme and rhythm!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hand over hand this dream drawn back Held sacred here through luster’s lack To warm again with ease to spare Night falls the squalls of silver air Beautiful, beautiful imagery! Love, Margherita  |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Kathleen, this is effervescent with light... Wonderful! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A page torn out and sent in sigh Delivered shivered pressed and dry So very, very beautiful, Kathleen.... all of it is beautiful. Hugs, my friend Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And till the wintry wonder lies upon the warming windless earth where was I? Darn, an excellent write K. The rhyme and meter are splendiforous. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write Kathleen!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In Starlight flows words and a lot of meaning Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful poetry, as usual. Visions of a snowy crystal night fall as I was reading. Excellently done ThisDiamond! JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Simply stunning- SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, Kathleen! Happy New Year!  ....jo |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sensational imaging and sound bites...enjoyed! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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