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Open Poetry #34

Burdened

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-28 12:19 PM

I grit my teeth
and bear the pain,
time, and time,
and time again.

Wearily tiring,
worn raw and ill,
is a dying spirit
with a broken will.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-12-28 05:34 AM

Very impressive write, derrick!

And as we bear the pain again and again, we come out of the tunnel again and again ... to be born anew ... while light and strength come back. They do!

Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-01-02 08:20 PM

Finish the words

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-01-02 09:21 PM

day-by-day
that's how we climb back up

as Dave said, continue...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-01-02 10:03 PM

Dreamchild -- good writing. I hope this new year grants you a lighter load.

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