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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-12-27 08:25 PM


If only I could

reach out
...across the seas

offer shelter
or a warm hug
a shoulder to cry on,
to let you cry out the pain

we would both gain
a precious love moment,
the essence of humanity

In my heart
I reach out to you
in spirit and thought

through all the horrid waves of unreality
the crescendo of tragedy
the cacophony of such unbelievably great loss

for all those who survived the quake and tsunami, only to see their loved ones swept away
by angry waves of Mother Nature’s instant wrath...

I offer my heartfelt sympathies and hope,
that somehow, you shall survive
the rage, the pain and agony
that must accompany the reality
of being the survivor.

namaste, peace

may the final journey of the thousands that were swept away end up in a more peaceful place


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-27 08:28 PM


Kacy

"may the final journey of the thousands that were swept away end up in a more peaceful place"

Namaste!

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2 posted 2004-12-27 08:28 PM


This is a touching write to some very helpless people, Kacy.  These are good thoughts you share.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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3 posted 2004-12-27 08:29 PM


Blessed Be. Wow, that was a wonderful read. I think that I will have to save this piece. It brought a tear to my eye. Thank you so much.

Love,
Ladycat

Namaste

Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups, parties, nations and epochs, it is the rule.-Friedrich Nietzsche

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4 posted 2004-12-27 09:07 PM


*sigh* thank you, friends
this tragedy is beyond belief
but then all such human tragedy is so difficult to digest

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-27-2004 10:01 PM).]

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5 posted 2004-12-27 11:07 PM


by angry waves of Mother Nature’s instant wrath...

a timely and thoughtful piece.
why is she so angry at us? or need i even ask

ice
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6 posted 2004-12-28 04:24 AM


These words represent the best feature of humankind, and that is compassion...

Nature does not care if we are happy or sad, if it kills us it has no remorse..
If our bodies are in the way of its laws it will destroy us...

What has to happen now is that we compasionet ones must help those that were devestated by being in the way of one of its outbursts...

This poem calls us to do so, it is a plea to humanity...and that is why it is so good...

manaste...ford

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7 posted 2004-12-28 05:22 AM


Thank you dear Kacy for your touching compassionate words.

Yes, I pray that through the awareness of our fragility as human beings, we may work towards peace with more enthusiasm.

Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2004-12-28 10:45 AM


I felt the slight tugging start just in reading this title.....
and I knew....
and I read it...
and I cried...

this is the exact reason why your words always move me.  One is honored when they can call you friend Kacy.

I am indeed honored to know you gal...

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9 posted 2004-12-28 11:41 AM


exquisitely, heartfully woven

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2004-12-29 05:20 AM


you are a loving soul Kacy
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11 posted 2004-12-29 04:17 PM


thanks dear friends, for taking time to read and reply
I'm sure we all suffered a skipped heartbeat upon hearing about this tragic event
all those people, swept away so suddenly, with
not much more than a heartbeat's notice of the  danger

iliana
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12 posted 2004-12-31 07:58 PM


Kacy, you said it all.  

Have a good new year!   ....jo

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13 posted 2005-01-01 06:49 AM


you are a very compassionate person. it shows. i pray with you that:

"may the final journey of the thousands that were swept away end up in a more peaceful place"

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14 posted 2005-01-01 06:52 AM


we would both gain
a precious love moment,
the essence of humanity

~*~

Continue reaching out
as only you can, Kacy...
we need that in this world.


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