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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-12-26 07:47 PM



I am no more than subtle lines
drawn real beneath your
fingers.

I am formless.

Given form to know the grace of
your caress.

Far in the night...your eyes hold
stars in the grip of
constellations.

From distant points of light they
gather to your gaze.

There is nothing that does
not become for you.

Ask the stars.

Or simply watch me rise to
form -

In the space beneath
your hands.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-12-26 08:45 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-12-26 09:06 PM


Beautiful!!

     Season's Greetings!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-26 09:06 PM


beautiful
miscellanea
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4 posted 2004-12-26 11:14 PM


Eric,

   First, let me congratulate you.  I rarely get around to the discussion area, consequently didn't know that you'd published and were publishing again.  I definitely can see why you've made it!  Your writing is wonderful.  I'll have to check out your book!
                misc'e

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2004-12-27 07:48 AM


soft and beautiful...

*smiles*
~tier

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-12-27 08:34 AM


"I am no more than subtle lines
drawn real beneath your
fingers"

Seriously outstanding line!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-12-27 11:08 AM


"I am no more than subtle lines
drawn real beneath your
fingers."

~ but of course, I had to read on!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda
P.S. You are far from "formless"!


Sunshine
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8 posted 2004-12-27 11:10 AM


Ask the stars.

~*~

And you know what, Eric?
When I did, they answered back,
read more of Eric's works...

Susan
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9 posted 2004-12-27 12:37 PM


Eric - you draw beautiful lines in lovely form -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2004-12-27 07:51 PM


Great write Eric...this is beautiful!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-12-27 08:43 PM


Eric

Your beautiful words never cease to amaze me.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-12-27 08:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
DavePage
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13 posted 2004-12-27 08:57 PM


Eric

Writers everywhere offer their thanks, for your words.

Dave

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-12-27 09:03 PM



In this pure beauty I dissolve ...

Awesome write, dear Eric.

I love you.
Margherita

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15 posted 2004-12-28 03:43 PM


I cannot choose favorite lines from this... I'd be choosing every one... This is superb!
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