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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan

0 posted 2004-12-26 01:14 PM



Flying To You

the sun is rising,
winds are calm.

Checking fuel, gauges
ready to take flight.

Towards the West I'll fly...
Flying to you the one I love.

Your voice  my guide
across blue skies.

Within every cloud
your face I do see.

Within this heart you'll find love

© Copyright 2004 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-12-26 03:14 PM


Safe trip - enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-12-26 09:20 PM


nicely done!
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2004-12-27 05:43 AM


Ella
Very compact, you have found the groove..you got your game face on, now lets see more like this..
___________ice/ford
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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2004-12-27 05:46 AM


What a wonderful way to fly. Even without wings I'm sure this would float to your love.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2004-12-27 05:54 PM


"Towards the West I'll fly...
Flying to you the one I love.

Your voice  my guide
across blue skies."


I liked that part....nice job!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
6 posted 2004-12-29 01:16 AM


I thank each and everyone of you
for the wonderful comments.
Still too cold to fly yet.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

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