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Open Poetry #34

Three new senyru/haiku

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2004-12-26 12:57 PM

1)

Under a pale moon
we hold each closer -
last night together.

2)

Rainsong echoes
through the empty house -
I miss your touch.

3)

Under the new moon
two cats bellow louder,
then...the sirens.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2004-12-26 01:02 PM

Echos signs of Danger. I love the romanticism and the intensity found in your series of few but most powerful words. Thanks for sharing. -Bob

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2004-12-26 03:23 PM

Loneliness can inspire a lot, can't it? Well done!

~sky

Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-12-26 03:23 PM

Well penned with passion and intent -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-26 09:23 PM

nice

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2004-12-27 03:09 AM

thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed them.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-12-27 05:54 PM

These are great! Nice job!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2004-12-28 12:41 PM

deft weave of form....

niiiice.

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2004-12-28 03:25 PM

all very finely woven!

my fav is #2

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-12-28 06:54 PM

Very lovely!

Love, Margherita

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

10 posted 2004-12-29 03:29 AM

alli, babygirl, vas and margherita - thank you all - I do appreciate your stopping by to read and comment

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