Tender Candor (For Maureen)

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2004-12-26 03:00 AM

Poetic Lady, write awhile
And let your soul uncover
Like a beacon on the bay
The words some will discover
The light to make their way
From the seas of bitter
To shores of better days
where forgiveness delivers

You always wore your heart so true
Except you found his love sleeping
Still you had to weave it on a loom
Of smoke and silver lining

And there you are so gaurded now
your pain blocking the doorway
You lost your mission long before
He travelled down the highway
Poetic lady, write awhile
And mend the loss you suffer
I'm just a friend along the way
Who needs your tender candor

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-12-26 04:02 AM

smiling...

and yes, she deserves all the lovelies, Eric.

(because she IS lovely)

Happy Holidays

and Merry Christmas

sheesh

(it's hard to tell what doesn't offend )

*chuckle*

but this shouldn't

hugs to you both

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2004-12-26 04:58 AM

Thanks Celeste
It's most definitely not meant to offend but to commend her inner strength through it all.
She's as honest as this piece and shows her heartfelt feelings with a touch of class I'd say. IMO

Eric

You & yours have a safe and happy holiday season.

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-26 05:18 AM

oh my....a wonderful gift for a wonderful lady!

nicely done Eric

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-26 01:31 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-12-26 03:20 PM

such a lovely offering from friend to friend - well penned from the heart -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-12-26 06:07 PM

ethome
She will love it. Well done

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-12-26 06:21 PM

Ah this is so beautiful..
for a well deserved lady.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Season's Greetings!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-12-26 09:33 PM

E, thank you for such tender words...
they mean alot to me during this season.

It's good to know "friends" like you.

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-12-27 11:48 AM

"Poetic lady, write awhile
And mend the loss you suffer
I'm just a friend along the way
Who needs your tender candor"

Well done and well deserved!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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