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Paradise's missing piece
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Paradise's missing piece |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Paradise’s missing piece Swam within the seas washing myself In tears aged from times long ago. Walked within the deserts that once were beautifully grown gardens. Touched the skies that tales said kept angels and heaven held high above our heads. From all I’ve seen one image stays in mind reflected off all the surfaces before my eyes. The image of myself stood alone within the scenes a shadow of time living amongst the loneliness in his own little paradise missing the finishing touch. Times a vicious sandstorm building upon the pain tearing through the wholeness of the soul. Within every move sin’s rattle within the mind No goodness could defeat the cause losing you the missing piece of the puzzle where the heart used to be a hole still remains. “What happens when we die”. “That’s a question asked where the meaning is never found only theories thought by many”. That how do we still remain in this place without cause”. “We all have the same fate no matter what the form or cause bringing us to believe lifes worth living for”. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking write here enjoyed this |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The image of myself stood alone within the scenes a shadow of time living amongst the loneliness in his own little paradise missing the finishing touch. exquisite sentiments, but trust an old gal looks, poetry, youth........you won't suffer life alone too long |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I agree with the Goddess. You have so much going for you ~ and may I also add a heap of talent and a wonderfully intriguing and philosophical mind! You have the power to sweep this reader into other worlds ~ to see and feel things new ~ and to revisit worlds that once were. Love & Light, Linda May you have a wonderful year coming up!  |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Your piece has left me speechless and breathless and a bit on the reflective side. I am so very drawn to this writing...thank you for allowing me the read. I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes. brilliantly done. and very wise sentiments.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Lee!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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