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Open Poetry #34
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2004-12-23 07:47 PM

I Want To Be Her Man

She is as refreshing
as a mountain stream
replenishing a
silvery lake.

As smooth as fine
silk from China
that skilled weavers
tenderly make.

Her kiss is soft and sweet,
when compared to April showers.

When I'm with her
my life is as beautiful
as a country meadow
full of luscious flowers.

Now you can understand
why I want to be her man.

JamesLee
December23
2004
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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2004-12-23 07:58 PM

maybe you should show this to her..

hey good luck winning the lady's heart and a splendid poem
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2004-12-23 09:13 PM


MovesInSilence
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 111
Perth, Australia
3 posted 2004-12-23 11:39 PM

nicely written.
i enjoyed it very much, i hope she does also.

It's not the blindfold that blinds you,
it's the person that puts it there.
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