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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-23 07:29 AM


The lap of luxury

Sitting in a Jacuzzi tub
Floating in a luxury lie
He introduced himself as Bub
I introduced myself as Sy

With twinkling eyes and cherub face
He asked me if I felt at ease
I said I felt, some out of place
I was not used such appease

He asked what he could for me
His cherub face took on a care
Perhaps he ran this cruise at sea
I said it’s all that I can bear

He shook his head and said too bad
He would have liked to help a dub
Then said goodbye a little sad
And gave his card, Beelzebub

I’ve seen Scratch a time or two but
Never from a luxury view

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-12-23 07:42 AM


Now it was bound to happen to sooner or later.

You just got all that magnetism going on, sy.

(You can't blame a guy for tryin' tho.)

yer irresistible.


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-12-23 08:13 AM


serenity  
Fell out of the lap of luxury and think I broke my wrist. So It's hunt and peck at the keyboard. But you are worth a hunt and peck anyday.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-12-23 09:28 AM


You think you broke your wrist??!!  Oh no!!
You heal and get feeling better Sy.
Right now in the middle of a huge snowstorm
that hot tub sure sounds good!
I'll pour...you sip some hot tea.  
*I put a little something in it for your wrist*
~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~


       Season's Greetings!

scorpio
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4 posted 2004-12-23 09:52 AM


Welcome back Sy.  I hope you enjoyed the cruise.  It's amazing who you met in the most unlikely places!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-12-23 10:40 AM


Uh, oh! I read in one of your replies that you may have broken one of the wrists of your illustrious hands! Nurse Earth Angel is on her way with lotions and potions ~ and her magic wand!

The picture you painted stirred my imagination ~ and elicited a giggle out of me! Your Mom may have made the best homemade chicken soup this side of the sun, but did she not teach you to never talk to strangers?!? ~ and please, stay away from those bath houses! You never know what, or who!, you'll pick up there! lol

Loveya, Sailor Man!
EA xo

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2004-12-23 10:58 AM


Ut oh...So while you were sitting in the lap of luxury..Bub wanted to sit in your lap???  LOL

See Sy-babers..no one can resist Randy's charms. LOL

Rest that wrist..take a break from typing.
you dont have to type winkies...lol





Martie
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7 posted 2004-12-23 11:08 AM


Sy

He is everywhere....
and when you think he's overboard
you find him in your chair

Loved the fun of this and the serious thought.  I'm glad you are back and safe for a while.  

Sunshine
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8 posted 2004-12-23 11:12 AM


You've got to watch the wet, Sy...
it gets slippery....

take care of that wrist, man!

to make it all better...

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9 posted 2004-12-23 11:52 AM


I wish I was a little bar of soap
I wish I was a little bar of soap
Then I'd slippy and a sliddy all over Seymour's hidey
Yup I wish I was a little bar of soap!

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-12-24 07:50 AM


I can't wait to get into my jacuzi at my new place

luckily I won't have any 'guests' around

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-12-24 08:26 AM


Nancy,
Thank you sweet, have a happy. Hugs

scorpio
I think it was old scratch that triped me.
Have a happy holiday.

Earth Angel
I'm sure it was old scratch that triped me.
But with your lotions and potions I'll be
better in no time. Merry Christmas

JM,
Yes you do, winkies, winkies, winkies.


Martie
Happy Holiday dear.

Sunshine
A big hug for sunshine. Merry Christmas

Sharon,
LOL I now pronounce you my offical bar of soap.
And rub-a-dub dub. You are the sweetest.
Merry Christmas dear.

passing  
LOL you never know who will pop in.
Have a happy

Toerag
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12 posted 2004-12-24 09:27 AM


You broke your wrist?....I'm not even going to ask how..but, aren't you glad you have another?....Have a great holiday my friend
miscellanea
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13 posted 2004-12-24 09:43 AM


The adventures of Seymour... I can see it now!  Watch out Blue pages!  

  Hope your wrist is feeling better...

   misc'e

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-12-24 10:24 AM


Toe,
Yea old scratch threw me off his lap of luxury. LOL

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-12-24 10:26 AM


misc'e,
Getting better every day, have a happy.

suthern
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16 posted 2004-12-28 03:01 PM


LOL... I love this, Sy.... great work! *S* I hope your wrist is much better!! *smooch!*
Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2004-12-28 03:03 PM


ah Sey, so very pleased to see you back here.  Ya'll take care of that wrist now ok???  
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18 posted 2004-12-28 03:21 PM


Seymour, this one made me giggle too. Like they said up there, you are just so irresistable, it's no telling who you might attract. LOL

I'm glad that you all enjoyed the cruise. But, sorry that you about broke your wrist. That can hurt bad. I hope it gets better real soon. Here's a kiss for it.....
Hugs, my friend,
Ethel






Kethry
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19 posted 2004-12-28 03:54 PM


If I was in a spa with Beelzebub the bubbles would not just be those of the spa. Lovely poem. It just shows you what luxury can bring.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-12-28 05:45 PM


suthern
Thank you sweet, my wrist is much better.

Gentle,
Doing my best. Thank you

Ethel,
You are a sweetheart, thank you so much.


Kethry,
Yep it just shows ya, Thanks my friend.

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