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Huan Yi
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There is
a grey pall
over all your views.

Life
didn't turn out
the way you hoped

or planned.  After work
in the parking lot
you slowly walk to your car:

a swan, alone
in the local pond,
(shades of night
upon the hour),

who sadly moves
as circles round

the vacant space
within her heart.
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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this one could have held my name
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You write sheer beauty.

Don't be disappointed if few people answer a poem....this place is unpredictable, to put it mildly... HOWEVER -- This one goes to the top, where it belongs!

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This is hauntingly beautiful...
very much enjoyed!!

     Season's Greetings!

Susan Caldwell
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Agree with Nancy..

Well done..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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Kick-A-punch----Oooou this is good!

~Atov
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Very nice write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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Nice...James
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"who sadly moves
as circles round

the vacant space
within her heart."

I shall cry not for her but for how you felt about her.
 
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