Wash me, divine - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-12-23 01:39 AM

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-12-23 02:46 AM

A divine write by a divine soul! Beautiful, Snow!

....jo

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-12-23 02:58 AM

jo... thank you sweetie

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2004-12-23 04:51 AM

Yes, a lovely write - a moving write!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-23 05:31 AM

I cna relate well to this, for reasons I won't say

but yes, this touched

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2004-12-23 06:28 AM

A beautiful piece Snow. You have a wonderful gift. When I read your words they just reach out and grab me. I think that is what makes for great poetry. If the writer can make us feel, love, anger, jealousy... well then the piece is truly powerful. Bravo dear friend.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-12-23 08:30 AM

sure have a way
with words
wink

enjoyed it ms

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-12-23 11:48 AM

Snow - it is hard to comment on your pieces because oft times they defy the placement of words to explain their finely crafted impact - if I had to choose one word for this one, I guess it would be exquisite.