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Barefoot in Boxers
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Barefoot in Boxers |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Barefoot in boxers to unleash in the snow The Buckster, so loved and fretted in tow. The barkless mutt, always a tease, Pulled as he strutted, to inform the boy, “Please…” If unleashed, I could make tracks in this white crystal stuff, Fluff up the chickens, and leave the snow dust!” “Ah, but to be trusted, Buckston, you see, Just last week, you adventured and left out poor me! You ran to the neighbors who were selling evergreens, Pranced around the children, causing giggles and screams. You lapped up the chocolate spilled on the barn’s floor Ate lots of hotdogs--no stomach could hold no more! You ran when we called you and hitch-hiked a ride When all this time we worried about our doggie’s cold hide. Three days had passed and tears fell from eyes, When what should occur, but a big doggy surprise. A call we received from two miles west THERE YOU WERE, a house guest (at the bed and breakfast)! No! I won’t let you go! Away from me you’d run in this slippery, thick snow!” Then with a tug and a twist and a turn, The boy in the boxers had something to learn. His Clifford red dog had wrapped leash around And in snow pulled his master down on the ground. Two such snow angels had never been seen! And he, barefoot in boxers and dog on a leash Wrestled in the snow ‘til large pup got his wish. Unleashed! Where will he go? [This message has been edited by miscellanea (12-23-2004 10:32 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We need our happy endings. Our pets. Enjoyed |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, RS. I have had the hardest time writing anything lately until today when I saw my son tiptoeing in the snow to bring the dog inside. It was too funny! Last week's adventures of the dog are true-he stayed leisurely at the bed and breakfast while we stayed home! When we got him from the pound, I knew we were in for it! Thanks for reading about the Buckster. miscellanea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, what a story, your tears could have dissolved the snow! Glad he came back after bed and breakfast. That's a very lovely write and I am so happy to see you again here. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
First... It's so GREAT to read you again... and... I love your dog! Have a Merry Christmas snow angel. TD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this so much!!! **S* I think my sister must have one of your dog's relatives... the mutt's off galavanting while a little boy is missing her mightily! *S* Wonderful story! *S* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, Thank you so much for the warm greeting. It is nice to be back. I wish I had more time, but it's challenging for me to juggle work, family, and writing. I peep in to read poetry at work when I can, but rarely can respond there. I'm glad to see you have begun posting again. I had missed your inspirational writing. miscellanea TD, You are such a doll welcoming me like that! The treat is in being back and reading others' poetry. There is so much talent and wonderful thinking. I'll try to stop in a little more frequently over the holidays if I can. I miss everyone! Thanks again for stopping by. It is good to hear from you again. (Glad you liked the dog--if he begins to look for a new home, I'll send him your way!) miscellanea suthern, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Are you sure that Buck is not your nephew's dog? He has very long legs and travels quite quickly. Could it be possible this canine has indiscretely landed two homes, unknown to his masters? Thanks for reading this silly, but true one. I'm attempting to get around to everyone, but it might take some time. (My family has made it pretty clear they prefer I limit my time on the computer. Shucks! I so enjoy reading everyone's work here and miss it when I can't. misc'e ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO EVERYONE! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nicely written story! Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Alli, Glad this could bring you enjoyment. Happy holidays to you, as well! miscellanea |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I believe your dog might be part demon, probably not as much as a cat, since dog do have a sense of loyality. Buck seem to have a bit of playful wildness. Enjoyed the story. Gloom |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Truly enjoyed this!  Oh, how I can relate to the "doggy antics"...having three Labs!  GREAT WRITE! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brava! Brava! Like I told you, I really like this one though I keep wondering if you shouldn't have got a smaller puppy!  .....jo[This message has been edited by iliana (12-23-2004 12:16 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely story I enjoyed the read this morning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chuckling...where will he go? Apparently anywhere he wishes... but soon enough he'll return home, to lap up dessert from your dishes...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful writing... Reminds me of a doggie I will forever miss... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I always enjoy the fruits of your poetic efforts, Missy! I wish that you could feed us more often! Your poems are real ~ like yourself. Sending to you and your family, lots of Christmas cheer and bountiful blessings for the coming new year! Linda xo    |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscellanea This poem and dog and all involved are adorable. Thank you for giving me a smile this morning! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
My sincere thanks to all! I'm wishing you a safe and happy upcoming 05! cathy |
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