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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-22 07:32 AM


always did wonder why
odin took the virgins
and loki liked the whores

til I danced a few
then it was obvious
like windows sills and doors

one was for lookin out
and the other for travel
gettin there instead

of talking about the trip
or leanin on the bow
lookin for wearable love

in an unused ocean
_____________

Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-22-2004 09:06 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-22 07:57 AM


you come up with the most unique lines Ds.
Good morning.  

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-12-22 09:06 AM


use me
(please)

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-12-22 09:12 AM


one was for lookin out
and the other for travel
gettin there instead

of talking about the trip
or leanin on the bow
lookin for wearable love

in an unused ocean

~*~

always leaving behind
tidbits
of thought...full...ness

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2004-12-22 09:18 AM


"unused ocean"

and that would be a huge shame..

this is perfection D!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
5 posted 2004-12-22 09:20 AM


Loki is a hottie...

lol...

Merry Christmas, Dark...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2004-12-22 09:23 AM


gs, thanx lady friend for your eyes and smiles

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ms inky..mmmmmmmmmmm hell yes, and ditto (grin)

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ms sunshine, thanks for the depth of thought
and the reads, you bless me
___________

ms susie c, bring that little boat on down
and spank the tide with your pretty paddle..thanks lady for your touch


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ms bbg, yes maaam loki is the candy man, got cravings?  jolly holly to you too lil one.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-12-22 10:17 AM


Loki - hope he gets lucky

Odin may know the ordinary - but perhaps that is his ocean he likes to swim in -

Enjoyed this D - and I agree - Loki has his needs - but am glad there are those who like their virgins too -

Hugs - S

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2004-12-22 10:33 AM


ms susan..virgins are a one time thing then what?  thanks for the read
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