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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2004-12-22 01:30 AM



Time
is a window

the other side of which

helplessly
you watch

the loved one
          
die

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-12-22 05:28 AM


*sigh* in awe
A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
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2 posted 2004-12-22 10:38 AM


well this is certainly eeri and interesting--gave me goose bumps~~

Atov~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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3 posted 2004-12-22 11:16 AM


The truth of this made me angry...

so, you did good...emotion provoking indeed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-12-22 07:29 PM


Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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5 posted 2007-04-28 08:02 PM


window
1.a hole
2.a frame
3.with paper pane
4.with glass pane
5.open freely
6.fixed-for central air
7. computer window

"Time
is a window"...which kind?

love to read your poem.

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