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Huan Yi
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0 posted 12-22-2004 01:30 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Time
is a window

the other side of which

helplessly
you watch

the loved one
          
die
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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*sigh* in awe
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well this is certainly eeri and interesting--gave me goose bumps~~

Atov~
Susan Caldwell
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The truth of this made me angry...

so, you did good...emotion provoking indeed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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window
1.a hole
2.a frame
3.with paper pane
4.with glass pane
5.open freely
6.fixed-for central air
7. computer window

"Time
is a window"...which kind?

love to read your poem.
 
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