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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-21 06:51 PM



thinking back to indigo
and emeralds
did rincon even know
you were wearing those shoes
when you fed my hands

convertables are for lovers
at night under palms
if you go all the way
down to the end
and listen to the surf songs

on some hidden cove radio
made out of sand
and old blankets
without names or memories
that anyone can wear later

do you still wonder at times
about the rent a cloud guy
what he thought about
when he saw our footprints
on the bottom of his sky


______________

dark




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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-12-21 10:14 PM


Sounds like some lovely memories here, D - love the rent a cloud guy

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-12-22 05:28 AM


convertables are for lovers
at night under palms
if you go all the way
down to the end
and listen to the surf songs

on some hidden cove radio
made out of sand
and old blankets
without names or memories

~*~

"I'm feeling those good vibrations..."

I'm still kidded about those songs,
considered by friends, as I am, to being a
"beached babe"...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-12-22 12:09 PM


i know u like it with the shades open
the rent a cloud guy looking on

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-12-22 01:06 PM


"do you still wonder at times
about the rent a cloud guy
what he thought about
when he saw our footprints
on the bottom of his sky"

~ I love how you can discombobulate my rational and somewhat linear mind! lol


Linda

Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

5 posted 2004-12-23 03:37 PM


she was skin

with heartbeat stuff that used to run miles

like a nude indian

to break the tip on his flesh arrow


turning beach stones

into emeralds

with their surf songs


as the rent a cloud guy

stepped aside

long enough to let

the sun kiss her mouth too.


Cool inspiration for a warm write...

Indi


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