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Laden Void |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Still touching. You linger in my hands as the space you leave behind. Even as my fingers curl in an empty grip of yearning. Nothing remains in your absence. And so my hands caress this laden void. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Only you could make something from nothing and make it feel lovely-  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh this is so very beautiful.....mmm...lovely. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
whew...so much in so few words. Outstanding! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Could anyone write empty more beautifully??? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poetry-laden void...   Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Eric! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful, Eric! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Truest love is like that, consuming empty spaces and leaving full the grip in times of empty. Magical write Eric. TD |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write Eric! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for sharing this emotion |
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