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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-12-21 12:38 PM

I made my bed
a rose among thorns
to remind me how love
though beautiful
can still bleed
sincerity

Tonight, I am princess
upon a pea of contemplation~
far this cloud drift from
together to nought
from love have to
love sought

Dawn creeps over rumpled
sheets beneath sleeplessness
to find your smile framed
suspended in hope where
I wait in que
in case
encased
where dreams are chased
in this place I made
my bed

a rose among thorns...

~tier

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-12-21 12:59 PM

"Dawn creeps over rumpled
sheets beneath sleeplessness
to find your smile framed
suspended in hope where
I wait in que
in case
encased
where dreams are chased
in this place I made
my bed

a rose among thorns..."

Pure poetry...pure emotion.

Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-12-21 01:29 PM

Definately pure poetry Tier! Powerful, pure emotional poetry! Love it.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-12-21 02:08 PM

Wonderful write!

Eric

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2004-12-21 02:41 PM

thank you, dear poets...

*soft smile*

~tier

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-12-21 03:06 PM

Dawn creeps over rumpled
sheets beneath sleeplessness
to find your smile framed
suspended in hope where
I wait in que
in case
encased
where dreams are chased
in this place I made
my bed

a rose among thorns...

Fantastic imagery, I could see it all.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-12-21 03:27 PM

this floats.........
with lovely sentiments

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2004-12-21 04:54 PM

Tier,

this is lovely, I know exactly where you are coming from:

to remind me how love
though beautiful
can still bleed
sincerity

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-12-21 08:35 PM

Very nice write!! Awesome!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-12-21 08:37 PM

just lovely!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2004-12-23 01:24 PM

Beauty in a bed of thorns...

Lovely write Tier!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

11 posted 2004-12-23 02:13 PM

Tier...

this,
I know...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-12-23 04:35 PM

nice write

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