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Fog Bound
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Fog Bound |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Fog Bound We walked today, alone together. A candle in a cottage window through the trees seemed to neighbor with our mood. A smudge of light, though less than perfect, hoped to match the color in your face. Of course it couldn't. Still, when you returned, in that instant, I recalled the ruddy look of what had been the pulse and breath of our exertion. RMW |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in that instant, I recalled the ruddy look of what had been ~*~ oh, that lucky fog... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The solitude of that walk sounds so inviting... and the exertion sounds completely exhilarating...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nicely penned, Robert! ~tier |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~sighing at the way that you write~ Happy Holidays! Chris Don't forget my presents!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful...love the images this created. Happy Holiday Hugs! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob You are able to capture the scene so well and the feelings...I could picture this. Wishing you and your family a wonderful Christmas time.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual sir... so very well done... Merry Christmas sir..to you and yours... may the season be filled with the warmth of heart and gentle of smiles... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nicely penned! Happy holidays to you and yours... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice one Bob ~smiling~ M |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
I apologize for the slow response. Thank you all for taking a minute to read and comment. Bob |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice! Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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