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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-12-21 07:59 AM


a high chair in a parking lot
a bowling ball in a space suit
tennis shoes with high heels
and snap it fights
with the garters

we were goofy perversions

but then there was dawn
and night too
in their comfy formal dress up
fitting together sloppy
on a baggy pants sky

I messed up your makeup

so we could go favorite placing
without reservations
and you wore stick on tattoos
over the cellophane
so you would have nothing on

when we danced to the last song
_______________

Dark


scribblenote for Susie C (grin) if I translate it' they will move it to the mature room.... shall we just say..spontaneous combustion was a topic of much research during the late 60's and early 70's..the interaction of certain fabrics under ideal conditions was known to cause vaporization that when mixed with certain physical and or extraphysical conditions created extreme heat and therefore..

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-12-21 08:11 AM


Hmmm..

Interesting....and I need a translation (nothing new from me)     just indulge me, okay?

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-12-21 08:13 AM



so we could go favorite placing
without reservations
********************************************
reservations are for families going to
disneyworld

i like when you dance, stepless, with only the wind as your choreographer

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-12-21 08:22 AM



...and I like what IG said...

but go ahead, and scribblenote this
for Susan...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-12-21 08:37 AM


Save the Last Dance for Me, Hun?

Wonderful and picturesque, as love should be.


Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-12-21 10:39 AM


Smiling at the silly and the sensual - D

  Susan

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-12-21 12:36 PM


*indignant flip of hair*

I sometimes think that maybe others pretend to understand...

I couldn't possibly be the only one...

But thank you D, I believe I understand completly now....

*sashays out the door*

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-12-21 12:43 PM


susie c..  grin... you are so cute when you flip your hair around..I guess I should send you the code book that everyone else has huh?

thanks

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8 posted 2006-08-22 12:18 PM


spontaneous combustion-experiments on innocents- takes on back to woodstock and altimont- and the military

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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