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Valley Of Stone ( Inspired By Serenity )
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Valley Of Stone ( Inspired By Serenity ) |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Valley of Stone By Paul Wilson I scream as my heart echo's it's time too tell you goodbye Questions without any answers I walk the thin line of why I'll never know the answer the question is always there Should I stay or should I go would anyone really care I walk the valley of stone stopping too visit old friends I look towards the heavens and ask...is this how it ends? Why have some passed so quickly when others are here so long They cross the river of life as my mind screams...this is wrong The bells are ringing today for another one called home My tears are falling for them as I leave the valley of stone I'll leave you too your journey I've got one too make of my own Maybe someone will visit me one day in the valley of stone |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh my friend Paulie, thank you (and it never does feel right, does it?) sigh my sweet buddy, it's strange to be thankful for company in a bad frame of mind, but c'mere and hug me yer a doll.  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...Soft and tender are your words and thoughts. I'ts been awhile dear friend. Hugs are for friends like you  ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Well done Paul! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
The Valley of Stones....I was reading your comments concerning constructive critiques, "I just try to write with feeling from my heart and hope that my poems help to make things better in some way for the people that read them." You suceeded. Atov~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Paul This was excellent |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Paul, this was excellent. So good to read you again, happy holidays sir! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~wonderful~ Holiday Hugs, Chris  Don't forget my presents!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful write Paul.. I could use a hug too! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nicely written! Happy Holidays! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*understanding* Happy Holidays to you Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one's all too real... excellent write!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Paul, This is a hard one to respond to because it holds so much truth and could fit many situations. I feel it deeply. Great write! miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Valley of Stone" ~ I never thought of a graveyard in those terms ~ but that is exactly what it is! I'm sorry to say this, but I will most likely be thinking of you from now on whenever I visit or pass by a graveyard! ~ However, when I am delivered to a valley of stone as my final physical resting place, I suspect my spirit and thoughts will be elsewhere! lol  Good to read your words again! They were very moving.  Linda  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Thanks too all of you wonderful caring people. The memory of each of you will forever be with me...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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