Last I will post for 3 days - I know I am overposting but the words are there

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Open Poetry #34

Last I will post for 3 days - I know I am overposting but the words are there

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-20 09:46 PM

Lightly

There are no books I need to take for I may have memories at some point and they are distilled and carried.

There are no words I want to take with me for they had no meaning apart from your endeavours to find something to get away with.

I need no excitement to take with me when I leave for it stopped more than years I can remember.

I need no faith to take with me you crucified everything I possessed not including the spirit that you attack but can not conquer.

There is nothing I need to take from you because there is nothing from you.

All I can take is the feeling that having lost everything, I have got away lightly.

So lightly I will travel

Until another song offers the same but a lesser period for milking of passion, words and money

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-12-20 11:36 PM

damn, feeling the heartache in this
sometimes, all you can do is walk away

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2004-12-21 01:29 AM

Hey Dave , so pleased they have not conquered your spirit !!!we need that to continue on

Hope

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2004-12-21 07:06 AM

Merry Christmas...stick to your guns...don't allow anyone to break you..to break your spirit....or your heart.Good for you!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-12-21 08:04 AM

"All I can take is the feeling that having lost everything, I have got away lightly"

Sometimes we are blind while in it and only regain sight after it is done...

travel lightly..it's better that way.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

5 posted 2004-12-21 08:14 AM

I'll say the words are there....keep writing. This is a read and then some. Good Stuff!

Atov~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2004-12-21 02:12 PM

Great write Dave...I am happy the words are flowing!

Eric

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