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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-20 05:53 PM

Dark black grey blue and blood
On some Summer's Day
Lapping washing on some other shore
Gently sounding on my open jaw
Nothing moved in a languid pool
As I flicked bugs away
To the gentle warmth
Of a bugs delay

Strong waters thrash to take edges from a rock
Rock never needed there
It was always just a rock
Conditioned from history
To face currents of change
Dark and black
In holes of sea
In fabrics torn
Asunder
To see

In quiteness Sun gently admits you to it's life or death
To be hung immediately or gently
It's warmth drifts over you
Touching where you realise is becoming hot
As your flies beckon you to tangle them in thread
To entice unknown beings
You felt you knew
To a Gallery
Underwater
That spinning in fashion
You drew

To a quiteness
Drifting in nature
Drifting in thought

In a still water

Running deep

Hope you like it. Time I cooked dinner

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-12-20 09:35 PM

"Strong waters thrash to take edges from a rock
Rock never needed there
It was always just a rock
Conditioned from history
To face currents of change"

leaving me pondering several thoughts here

hope you enjoy your dinner

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-20 01:24 PM

Strong waters thrash to take edges from a rock
"Rock never needed there
It was always just a rock
Conditioned from history
To face currents of change
Dark and black
In holes of sea
In fabrics torn
Asunder
To see"
.

Revealing and descriptive.

Enjoyed the read DavePage.

JL

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2005-01-20 01:29 PM

A nice respite from the world. Good imagery. Kind of zen-like.

Corinne

what's for dinner?

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-20 07:06 PM

Midnitesun

"Strong waters thrash to take edges from a rock
Rock never needed there
It was always just a rock
Conditioned from history
To face currents of change"

leaving me pondering several thoughts here

hope you enjoy your dinner

Thanks I did.

dave

JL

Strong waters thrash to take edges from a rock
"Rock never needed there
It was always just a rock
Conditioned from history
To face currents of change
Dark and black
In holes of sea
In fabrics torn
Asunder
To see"
.

Revealing and descriptive.

Enjoyed the read DavePage.

JL

Thanks JL

Dave

Corinne
Member Ascendant

A nice respite from the world. Good imagery. Kind of zen-like.

Corinne

what's for dinner?

Typical male comment is "what do you want".

I think I had got the Woks out that night. Singapore Ho Fun.

Thanks

Dave

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-01-21 10:26 PM

WOW..this poem was my favorite of yours...I loved how you explained the rock being washed by the water and weathered by different elements of nature...

~Love and Hugs ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-01-21 10:30 PM

enjoyed

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2005-01-22 04:04 PM

Romantic and Marsha

Thanks for the words.

Take care

Dave

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