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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-12-18 08:59 PM



Come out and play
My secret love

Snow has fallen
On all the world

Today we’ll build
An hour for ourselves

To remember together
When we are old

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-18 09:33 PM


precious
*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-12-18 11:29 PM


what dixie said...

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-12-18 11:32 PM


I do believe that snow hasn't fallen on all the world.

lovely

TexUS
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4 posted 2004-12-19 02:28 AM


The sweet solace of
such a delightful moment...
This is one to remember!

Enjoyed!

wranx
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5 posted 2004-12-19 03:01 AM


Building a bit of time...Nice!
garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-12-19 03:37 AM


Oh yes, making memories is enjoyable!!
Hugs,
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-12-27 12:47 PM


oh who could resist that invitation?

very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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8 posted 2004-12-28 03:41 PM


Oh, yes... *S* Just this... beautiful!!!
Kethry
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9 posted 2004-12-28 03:44 PM


there's no snow here but you paint a winter wopnderland that makes me wish there was.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-12-28 07:48 PM


Lovely...James
Drauntz
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11 posted 2007-04-28 06:31 PM


the best love poem of yours.

wow!

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