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Winding Road |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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As I walk this road... Trying to find my way, A place for me to stay. I walk this winding road... It curves and swerves back it loops, Sending me through chained spiked hoops. Going down this road... Takes me down lots of hard ways, Knocked me down on some days. Taking this winding road... I never get lost along the trail, Everything grew so stale. Travel this winding road... And Always find you at the end, You waiting on my wounds to mend. On this winding road... does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful write. You know that you are not walking alone on this winding road. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am traveling one of those too |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i dont think i worded this one how id hoped but thats ok i think it still says what i meant...so thank you both |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm on one of these winding roads too.  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Kyle. The road of life has many twists and turns. I think that's what makes it intersting. Hugs~and a Happy Belated Birthday. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
ha thanks :P |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Great write kiddo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Through reading many of your poems, I feel that I have been walking along side you and watching you grow as you head down the circuitous road towards the Light! All is not for naught, dear soldier boy! Blessings of love to you!  Love & Light, EA |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
thank ya thank ya |
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