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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-12-18 10:52 AM


When the sounds of midnight
strike one to twelve, the end,
I’ll dream again the dream of hope
one last and final time
before it disappears
into the depths of me
to lie as stagnant water
and forever breed dis-ease.

The treatment may be long
behind the scenes of real
and recovery too slow
to make an impact on my soul
but what’s a little time
to those who fill the air  
and do not give a care
for how a body yearns?

Cunningly they whisper
and stretch time to suit agendas
behind the closed door
we all know is called the veil
and who would ever think
the so thin and flimsy
could prevent one such as me
from casting my vote.  

I’ve tried of course, I really have,
to ask and then receive
but I’ve moved from where I was,
I can’t prove where I am,
and they say so ever sweetly
that it’s surely not their fault.  

And so the only promise
is another year of change
decreed by the one who knows
all dis-ease however gained
is always left behind
in the stretch of time …
and it stretches, and it stretches,
till one day it snaps back
and we simply start again
with the “what if” and “if only”
we could ask and then receive!


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-12-18 03:18 PM


thought-provoking write here
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2004-12-18 03:28 PM


When the sounds of midnight
strike one to twelve, the end,
I’ll dream again the dream of hope


Somehow sad ponderings, but the dream of hope is there. May it not become as stagnant water ... May it bloom into reality.

Well done!

Love and Joy.
Margherita

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