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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-16 01:35 PM



                  Yes


In a candle flame
Dancing
Shadows

As a heart dances
Every moment
And my reply

Will become
Another
Brief flight

In a candle flame
Dancing
Shadows

As

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1 posted 2004-12-16 01:37 PM




As

...a quiet yes...

Lovely...

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2 posted 2004-12-16 01:52 PM


Softly beautiful...
Susan
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3 posted 2004-12-16 02:48 PM


Mmmmmm - the shadows cast in flickering light - lovely this -

Susan

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4 posted 2004-12-16 03:08 PM


Exquisite Dave....a keeper once more for my library.
heart hugs.

     Season's Greetings!

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5 posted 2004-12-16 04:08 PM


Wow...this may be my favorite of yours Dave!

Eric

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6 posted 2004-12-17 10:06 AM


oh

yes

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7 posted 2004-12-17 10:08 AM


Dave, this is very pretty and romantic.
I love the romantic ones.
Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2004-12-17 11:48 AM


Ooooh, I love this Dave. Going into my library! hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

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9 posted 2004-12-17 07:35 PM


Very nice Dave!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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